One More Time One More Place

Okay - I'm gonna post a sample that I started writing last night. Please let me know your thoughts - good or bad - no matter what I'm just interested. Let me know what, if anything, wasn't necessary and what left you wanting more! I appreciate it and I promise to check out those comments I got when I get back from work today. And I promise I'll learn the whole behind the cut stuff too so these don't take up so much space.



The Homecoming
Chapter: 1
Author: rachie_grl6
Genre: Hancest
Pairing: Zaylor
POV: Zac
Rating: PG (varies by chapter)
Banner by: juliadoty
Disclaimer: Don't know the boys!
Author's Note: Enjoy and please be gentle. It's my first time! Haha :)

( “Hello! I’m home,” )